Hanging With Budz Featuring Chief!

Things to improve on for your next “Hanging With Budz” session.

1) Grammar.

2) Spelling errors.

3) Format and Layout - How you layout your work is very important and could be hard for the reader to understand your work if not formatted correctly or questions are messy and don't make sense for the reader.

4) Questions. - I would recommend using a better choice of questions as that is very important in an interview and as a reader like myself we don't want to read a bunch of stupid questions being asked as that could be boring for the reader.

5) Effort - Putting in 100% and giving it your all every time is very important as you don't want to put out nothing but junk to the community.

I will have to say though we appreciate the effort,
Just next time try to spend a bit more time with your work and maybe look back and review it before releasing it to the community.

 

at least you are trying something new. Just put it in Word or Google Docs for spell checking purposes.

 

Buds this is all worthless unless we can all hear ur beautiful voice

 

I feel like this applies to your work as well Your sentences drag on, and you use a lot of conjunctions when it's not necessary. For example;

I would recommend using a better choice of questions as that is very important in an interview and as a reader like myself we don't want to read a bunch of stupid questions being asked as that could be boring for the reader.

To add on to that, don't restate your nouns, and use punctuation.

 

GRAMMAR WARS!!!!!!