New album from mikeyinthe813/Bishop30

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    Hey guyssss, long time no see,

    Well here it is. The “I’m So Broken” Ep


    I’ve spent a lot of hours working on this. Maybe my dad can be proud of me now @NotoriousFAT 00



    iTunes - https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/im-so-broken-ep/1436285564

    Spotify - https://open.spotify.com/album/5dTtENuBzLV41qKPexhdZB

    Amazon - https://www.amazon.com/Im-so-Broken-Explicit-Rodeiro/dp/B07H8J2DVR


    This is my first professional studio EP.
    Thank you guys for any feedback in the comments, and if you bought the ep let me know! It’s only 5$

    Goodluck everyone this new season!!
     
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    I endorse this message, please direct all inquiries to his manager @ xXx AgentJ xXx
     
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    I’ll invoice you thru email
     
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    Justin Bieber, is that you ;):p
     
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    Not my kind of vibrations, but the production is solid.
     
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    Hey mikey your cute. Nice job ;)
     
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    Thanks for the kind words sir :)
     
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    MIKE , These shits are bangers boi.. got the chicks at work drippin

    the intro to Im so Broken got that Willy Wonka flow
     
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    Ugh, where to start.

    Positive :

    The actual production is cool, decent sounding. But poorly mixed. If this was a legit studio, I'd consider alternative options.

    That's it.

    On to the rest.

    This is an overly shittly-engineered, boring, lyrically meandering whine fest. There's no real cohesive thought in any song.

    X's is the best attempt in the whole joint, until the vocals BLEED and distort the whole beat.
    Vocals need to stand out, not be normalized to the background. That's just 101. Also you need to differentate chorus hook verses and any ambient noises, everything is just, the same. I listened to this on my phone, and then my home system and it was worse on the system.

    As a song its a nice attempt structurally. But the nonsensical rambling loses any interest I had. It seems like you pick 1 melody or 1 pattern and pile drive it into the ground. You also can't decide the message of songs as 2 so far have contradicting messages.

    Now my biggest pet peeve, auto tune. Garbage. Trash. Dumpster fire. Not every layer of every vocal on every song needs it. It's so prevalent through out it makes the bad engineering job more pronounced.

    This may seem like I hate it, I do, but don't stop producing music. I love different styles and genres, you just need to refine the craft. The raw product is there, it just needs a hefty amount of polish.
     
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    I will post my record on here when it’s done so you can shit on that too.
     
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    Sure, I will gladly listen. But I won't blow smoke up your ass so you feel good about it.
     
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    If someone makes music for the acceptance of others, they’re doing it for the wrong reasons.
     
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    For his first ep this is impressive an I love trolling on shit. Fuck re mastering “you’re craft” everyone has a unique sound stick with what you got I also heard waxi is related to dr dre
     
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    Yeah idk what that was about lol, the sound mixing and everything is perfect, and there’s reasons somethings are the way they are. I know when to differentiate trolling and actual constructive criticism especially when they say “ugh, where to start” lmaooo, “meandering whine fest” than don’t listen to the story I’m tryna tell
     
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    Son this better be good. Don't make me regret letting you outta my ball sack.


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